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What is your opinion?

Sequel in the works?

"I absolutely loved it. I think changing the title and removing the word fat would be great! I wonder if there is an alternative story of this or would this story have a sequel or spin off of other characters? That would be great!"

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Keily

"Sehr gut und wirklichkeitsgetreu "

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Hot 🔥🥵

"Whoa I can't wait to read more. So hot 🔥🥵"

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Yes

"Love it love it"

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Fat Keily

"Great writing. Really into the plot, not the same plot as you see everywhere else all of the time. Big fan!"

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Wow!

" I absolutely loved the chemistry between Keily and James. Keily's inability to stand up for herself really tugged at my heartstrings, and it made me root for her even more. The author’s writing style is captivating, and I truly enjoyed every moment of the story. I can’t wait to head over to Galatea to finish it! Thank you, author, for this amazing story. "

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Joe

"How can you read the story it seem like a good book. Would like to finish makes no sense why it ended"

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Love it

"I love this story. It resonates with me from my teen years."

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Love it

"It was really good loved it wont more"

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Keily

"Very good book. Love it som much"

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Good story ........,

"Good story"

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Fat keily is a positive

"Good story"

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Keily

"It's such a great book, james secretly likes keily but hides it by bullying her. Can wait to read the rest. "

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Keily

"I love the story and look forward to reading all 3 keily books I have almost finished the first one such a good story line love it!!!"

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More updates please!

" The suspence and emotional grip when reading is captivating!! Wished the book would be updated regularly here."

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Fat Keily

"Loved the book and I am hooked but sad to see only 3 chapters and Galatea is expensive "

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Keily

"I like the plot "

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Fat keily

"The book ia really intreresting it caught my attention so fast and it makes me wanna read more to find out waht happens in the other chapter"

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Likr this

"Nice story, easy to follow"

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