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What is your opinion?
...emotional
"This was very emotional. A little fast-paced, but I would definitely love to see more of it. There a few grammar/spelling mistakes here and there, but I can understand it fine. A tip would be to add some more detail, or describing things more at length. However, keep writing!"
Disappointments
"Thumbs up to the author and her excellent writing style. Loved the first chapter and can't wait to read more!"
