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Loving it!

"Loving this so far! The prologue presents a great hook and the second chapter really pulls you in and introduces you to the world and who arella is and could be. I loved it! Nice flow with your writing as well, and the plot moves at a nice steady pace with lots of intrigue. Overall fantastic job! I can’t wait to see what happens next! :) "

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Sweet!

"I got really hooked towards the end of the second chapter. The author is definitely a star in the rising with amazing descriptive language. The character is quirky and analytical, which makes for a fun read. Even though it does follow some dark themes, the narrator herself is sweet. It's brilliant in the sense that the author portrayed so much important information through the mind of a cute student, making for an interesting and fun juxtaposition that has something for everyone."

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Atlas

"Interesting! :D Loved it The characters sure are unique in some ways! Can’t wait for more chapters!"

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