Loving it

"It was a very quick read, as there are only three chapters so far, but I'm pretty much loving it. The only thing I'd comment on is that there are some problems with capitalization and punctuation. I adore your writing style, as well as the plot. Definitely would read this randomly for leisure, especially after you check out the grammar. As for chapter 2 particularly, I was totally hooked. One of the best chapters, I'd say. Not only from the story, but the writing style and skills. Keep at it!"