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So far so good

"Only through the first few chapters. Seems like a good read so far"

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Good start

"It looks like a good start so far. It doesn't bother me if a story starts out slow, as it's establishing the situation and the characters. Presumably there will be things that are even more interesting yet to come. The only issue I see is that it needs technical cleanup. I look forward to seeing more!"

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Improves with every chapter!

"Interesting concept with lots of potential for shenanigans! Characters are very starkly contrasted and therefore easy to differentiate between. A few grammar and punctuation issues - but this seems to improve with each chapter. Keep going!"

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I read the first chapter

"For the first chapter you ever wrote, it was great! I could not tell that this is your first time writing! And I'm impressed with the German dialogue. Is it your first language? :D As for the plot itself, I honestly didn't feel hooked. It was a daily morning routine. However, I did enjoy the way you describe nature. It was beautiful 🌹"

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