Review

"First off the story needs to be structurize. I felt something were off though the plot is good. With a bit of editing and adding certain parts the book will be amazing. I encourage the writer to put a bit more of description and make the first chapter a bit different. I also advice for the writer to make some divisions and highlights so the reader can get a better view and changes on how the story goes. But overall its a good idea and it's different. It reminded me of Narnia."