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ITS SO COOL SO FAR

"THE characterz are so AWESOMEE I LOVE ARCHER AND SAMEUL!!!!!!!!!!!! And of COURSE the main character CARMENILA!!!! What happened to WALTER Cadezna??? he should help find out why people are being kiddnapped at school and why the HALLWAY IS EVILLLLLLL the labratory thing with Philipe is so cofusinggg but it would probably be explaned more later if it continues so its ok 😄😄😄✨🎉🎉 i love the SETTING school stories are so cool already but when theres the fantasy and magic its EVEN BETTERRR!!!!!! what about the alternate DIMENSON THINGS??? Was there gonna be ROMANCE between edwerd and Carmellna? it seemed like it was and i wish the story didtn stop before it go to that part i was so ECXITED FOR ITTT 〒▽〒 the dialoge is so GOOD AMAZING JOB FEEDBACK: a character maybe arche should have a PET WOLF THATS PURPLE LIKE HIIS EYES!!! the chapters are so short too maybe LONGER would be better and with longer parts on the charcaters DIFFERENT POV because it somtimes changed SO FAST OVERALL i LOVE THIS STORY and you should UPDATE IT IF OYU CANN"

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My Messed Up Life

"This novel is going really great! I was hooked from the very first chapter. The writing style of the author is unique as he describes pov of multiple characters. The characters are dynamic in their own way. I'll definitely be waiting for the further chapters to see how it'll end up like. I just think that the chapters are pretty short and the plot can be updated. Other than that everything's good. Keep it up!"

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