What is your opinion?
Excellent
"Mystery is nice the continuous of story is needed"
I could read more of this!!!
"Found this short story through a TikToker @bookfestattiffanys, she credited your story in the comments. I enjoyed this spooky short, maybe I’ll expand my interest to other genres because of this! "
Lol I scared my friend
"My friend is scared now"
I enjoyed this!
"I'm definitely glad I picked out this book, because the plot was very clever and the punch line was good. I love short stories (especially scary ones!) because they are quick and fairly simple enough to read. Some of the things I would suggest, however, is the way it was written. The story seemed a little rushed, and I was confused at first about how abrupt it had ended. Once I got the twist, I was pleased by how the book came out; however, you shouldn't have to wait to get the twist. The twist should just come to you. What I suggest you can try is adding a bit more detail so that people can understand what is going on, who is talking, and why this is happening. Even though it is nice it is a short quick story, people still want to know what is happening. I overall really enjoyed the book though, and I'm glad I found it! I thought it was extremely creative. P.S.. I am new to this site, and to be frank, the possibility that this wasn't a short story and I just didn't press the "next page" button is highly likely. Please excuse my ignorance if this is true! This is actually the first book I have read on this site. Kudos to making my first reading experience on here great! Haha :)"
