The Untold Story of Us

Jackiejain9

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Passionate Wild and spectacular

"Wow. I am out of words. The storyline is perfect and the narration of events is just spectacular. The characters seem so real that we ourselves imagine to be in the story. Very erotic and passionate story revolving around the forbidden love and games our harmones play in our life. Waiting for more passion and vigor in next chapters. All the best. Keep writing. 🙌🙌❤"

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bubble

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It makes me drools

"so far the story is good. the plot is good but I'm expecting for something. about the author you are definitely good in writing erotica romance i can recommend your works and i never expect someone like you a witty demure one can have a lustful thoughts too. anyway I like the way you presented your story. keep it on. more power and I'm following your works in Wattpad too. sa tagalog ka lang dae medyo nahihirapan ka at medyo sablay din... I'm sorry to tell you that... anyway keep it up. "

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Magikarp

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Maybe it's just you.

"Or maybe it's both you and you're ability to write so exquisitely well. You capture the feelings and sensations so perfectly. I almost felt like I was back in bed with my ex the last time I ever had sex, eleven years ago. Very wonderfully done. Though, I will say, I always picture you in these stories. Well, as best I can."

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