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Mated

"Cliffhanger too short. Great so far"

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Perfect!

"The story is amazing! The characters are wonderful and the author's writing? Just wow! It's just perfect! Please continue the story! I'm so excited to read the rest of this book! I just loved it! Please, please! "

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Mated

"Loved it it was just great seeing that all the good guys lived on the end and lived happily ever after "

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Spicy and Easy To Get Into

"I’m always enticed by a good werewolf story, and pairing that with a cohesive plot line and beautifully written chapters, this book has reeled me in. Though it’s still in the works, every chapter I’ve read so far has charm to it. I’m already starting to enjoy some characters more than others. Who doesn’t enjoy having a sexy wolf on their side that has no problem putting a creepy antagonist in their place? The main character may not be a kickass heroine yet, but I have hope we will see her develop into one as the story progresses. Will definitely be looking forward to reading more! It’s heading off with a great start. "

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Lovely

"Yesssssssssssssssss"

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Great So Far!! Addicted

"I'm loving this book so far, the characters are well thought out and put together so you're able to follow along. I am anxiously awaiting the new chapters. There are a few grammatical errors but overall they are nowhere as bad as some of the other books I have read in the last couple of days and honestly they are a very easy fix. I will look for other books by this author."

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Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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Mated

"Its a good book so far. No grammar errors is always great. My best friend would enjoy this book as well. "

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Mate

"The book caught my interest from the start, which is a good thing. I would recommend this story to my friends. "

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Intriguing

"Totally sucked into the plot"

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Mated

"Just getting into it. Started off slow but it's holding my attention now. Maybe I havmt got that far but would be nice to read the other characters narrating too"

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Great beginning.

"From reading the first chapter I can already tell I will love this book. The author has a talent for grabbing attention it would appear. I’ll add more details to my review when the book is completed. <3 "

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mated

"I loved your story fromthe 1st chapter. Your characters have depth to which I can't wait to see how they mature and blend their relationships together. So many plots that I can't wait to read more and more and more...."

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REALLY GREAT!!

"SO SO GOOD!! absolutely love the way the authors depicted the series of events even though we’re quite early in the book i can definitely see it being one of my favs on here. 100% a great read. my only criticism would be the slightly inconsistent emotions of the main character, but i think that could be easily tweaked with a few edits :) xx"

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Very good

"Very nice story. I just wish that bad ass christopher can dissapear."

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Amazing!

"Your writing is really good! I enjoyed the story very much! Please don’t ever allow anyone to discourage you, you’re doing great! Can’t wait for more from you "

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Love it

"Really great story!! I need more!!"

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Weak luna

"The girl in this novel is weak and scared of everything. She’s not something anyone would inspire to be "

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Interesting

"Keep going please 🤗 the story so far is very interesting. I really like how you have portrayed Damon and the fact that he isn't so obvious in his actions. It adds some mystery and keeps the reader involved. The heroine is a bit too whiney sometimes and I don't understand her at times, nevertheless I like her. Can't wait for more :)"

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I love it

"It's educating and interesting at the same time "

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