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Original!!

"Quite an original plot and storyline, really enjoyed it! Only a few misspelled or incorrect words used, but really few and far between. Keep on writing! This was such a pleasure to read!!"

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Awesome

"I would recommend this novel to anyone that enjoys a good read and that is basically everyone. I remember laughing so hard at the part they where trying to get those demons into the school Nice work Thumbs up"

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I really enjoyed it!

" I loved the humor and warm building up the characters, lots of good puns and a cute story."

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Review by Alexandra

" I really enjoyed how you blend humor with detailed world building, making Muddy Gap High feel both funny and real. The characters, especially Duffy and Min, are hilarious and add a lot of personality to the story. I love how you flipped the usual angel trope seeing them as bored teens on a dull job instead of heroes makes it fresh and entertaining. A small suggestion would be to tighten some of the descriptions so the story flows smoothly without feeling too heavy at the start. Also, adding a bit more about the bigger picture or stakes could make me even more curious about what’s coming next. Balancing the humor with moments of seriousness or tension might help deepen the characters and keep readers hooked. Overall, it’s a really fun and clever story with a lot of potential. Keep up the great work I hope you like my review"

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