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"Your stories always bring tears to my eyes. You have a way of putting the emotions into the story so much that I also feel what the characters are going through. Even though I don't want to , it's like the tears come when the characters are going through pain and loss and other things that happen in life😭😭😭❤️❤️❤️. But this a cliff hanger for me ,I mean Kaia has already been though a lot and so has Adrian because of Ayden and now that they finally are about to be a family he wants to come and ruin it plssssss like am begging u can u please have a sequel to this where Adrian recovers from the hospital and is able to be there for his wife Kaia throughout her pregnancy,they deserve a happy ending with rasing their child and many others to come to be happy and live happily ever after please plssssss 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏❤️"

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"Wow, I came across this author by accident, I saw the reviews and thought I would give it a go, I’m so glad I did, at first I thought this was going to be very predictable but was i wrong or what, absolutely loved this story, Very, very dark sensitive moments but handled very well and tastefully and with compassion, if you come across this book please please give it a go, You won’t be disappointed. Can’t wait to read more from this author "

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"DEFINITELY READ THIS BOOK, THE BEST BOOK! Few grammar mistakes would probably need fixing. The plot was amazing, good details, no name changing half way through. Keep up the good work! "

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Its very sad ending..very good read

"Good read...entertaining "

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💔💔💔💔💕

"This is the 3rd book I’ve read from this author and I knew it would reduce me to tears like the other 2 did. I loved the overall plot of this story and I love all the plot twists too. When I first started reading I actually shipped ayden with Kai, their relationship seems so fated; them being born the same day, growing up together, being their for each other constantly and I honestly thought that despite her new potential relationship with Adri, she’s find her way back to him. So I was crazy shocked when he came back with a new family, confessed telling her he loved her was a prank and especially raped her. Especially because they’ve known each other since birth and are so close but the fact is so often in actual reality rapists are people close to the victims; friends, family members etc. But it’s still heartbreaking to know that this is what became of their innocent childhood friendship. As for adri, whilst I liked him instantly from the beginning and then stopped liking him when he dumped her and never quite forgave him for that since, I approved their relationship when their were time jumps and they will still so in love because it showed that he deserved him and is committed to ensuring her happiness and healing. I also loved him when he gave her the bakery idea and was there for her though her emotional and physical recovery. And I fell even more in love with him when he explained why he initially dumped her at thanksgiving because of the advice his mother gave him and how he was willing to let her go for her happiness- an act of sacrifice and selflessness. They deserved all the happiness in the world. I also hate ayden and his family and kais family with the exception of her dad. They didn’t deserve her- and again another accurate common reflection of reality. My only critique would be perhaps an epilogue or my clearer ending because I am pretty sure he died but it isn’t made 100% clear. I wish he isn’t dead but if he is then I am devastated. And if he isn’t and even he is then I would still like an epilogue of Kai recovering and having a baby and trying to live a better productive life honouring her husband’s devotion to her and their family and also her family and aydens family suffering terribly because they deserve it. I still have 2 more of your stories left to read but maybe after a short break because I think my pillow needs to dry before I forced it to suffer through more of my inevitably induced tears from your writing .❤️ Ps - sorry for my massive rant- I just needed to get all my feelings out there- a sign of how much of an amazing writer you are 💕"

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"Omg thank you for making me cry. I love this story. The ending killed me "

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Amazing

"Amazing I want a sequel I need to know how it ends pleaseeeeee"

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Whoa

"I loved every word"

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"first of all , thank u so much for writing such wonderful story . i loved adri and kai's chemistry , how he was there with her in her hard times , how much he loved her . and i extremely hated ayden , he was an obssessed psychopath. half ending was good when he died but adrian's death broke my heart . they were so in love oh my god ."

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"I loved the story all the parts the happy and sad moments. I love the couple as characters you made a great job. Keep writing. Thank you author."

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Omg

"Great read"

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"Yes it's so short and sad"

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