What is your opinion?
A great start!
"I am so excited to read more of this story! The writing and grammar is absolutely exceptional, which makes it so easy to read. I also love where the plot is going so far. I can’t wait for more chapters!"
Interesting!
"Before I say anything, I’d like to preface this by saying I’m not super well versed in the werewolf genre, so just keep that in mind 😅 I like how you’ve taken the idea of mates and given it a unique twist: like it’s something from a bygone era that isn’t worth pursuing anymore. I really liked that concept and I thought it played into your story very well. Dahlia is a very intriguing protagonist, and I can’t wait to find out more about who the wild ones are, they sound so threatening and I can’t wait to see how they interact with the main characters. Your writing style flows very nicely and kept me engaged, and I didn’t notice any grammar mistakes, so great job with that! Overall i plan on sticking around to see how this plays out and immensely enjoyed the first few chapters. Great job :) "
Very polished
"I can tell you actually put some effort editing your work which of course results in high quality writing! Congrats! The story is not boring at all! It places you into a situation that may not be the most tension inducing but is still very interesting and is clear that there is much more coming, is very well paced and it flows smoothly. I really like the way everything is handled with a decent amount of logic. The thing I like the most is your main character. I don't know if its what you were intending but she comes across as not only a very mature and collected woman but also a bit inflexible, none of which are things you often find in a main character. I absolutely love it, is just the start of the book but I already can see some very defined personality and maybe some flaws that will hopefully prevent her from turning into a Mary Sue. The main thing I believe you can improve is that your writing style doesn't always match the genre. You can be a bit over the top with your choice of words specially in the first chapter, is part of what makes the main character feel a bit stiff which is good if that's what you are going for with her (a bit theatrical with her words) but it can get too much from time to time. For example if you describe the wood as rigid I can't help thinking that wood is always rigid. In short I think your work is great but it could do with some more plainness. Good luck!"
