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Great story so far!

"I looked Carlos and Madison's love story so far. I hope they have babies and move into Carloss big house after she's done with school. I taste it a 7 so far I'm not done with the story yet"

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A Tru love story.

"Ok I cried through most of the ending, you don't got any truly happy ever after ending in life or books most of the time and I really enjoyed this book. My favorite part is no matter what he showed her that she was worth it and he knew what he wanted and supported her through everything "

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Yaneth

"Another amazing story. 🙌🙌"

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Great work

"Enjoyed your work. Please continue. Can't wait for your next master piece"

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The Damaged One

"Oh my goodness. This book was just awesome. I sat and read it in one go. I loved how he just loved her!! The storyline was great!!"

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The Damaged One

"This was another amazing book from this author. I loved the main characters. I thank the author for writing about mental illness. I will definitely be reading this book again. 😊❤️😊"

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The damaged one

"Absolutely love this story! "

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The Damaged One

"The author kept me interested in the book. At first I was thinking Madi was going to be with the police officer, but Carlos showed up and he kept his promises to her. I'm happy Madi and Carlos got together."

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The Damaged One

"Such an Amazing story. Love the storyline, characters twist and turns. Fucking Brilliant 👏🏻 👍🏻🎣💘🖋📖⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️😍🇦🇺"

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Surprisingly feel good tale

"Dear author, You did an exceptional job with this novel. I am not into goth or dark tales and was hesitant in trying this book. However I must say it was tastefully written without venturing to much into the dark sude of drugs and abuse. Your characters were very likable and I enjoyed the transition of Madison's life for the better. Good overall job. Sincerely, A new fan."

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Damaged

"I really liked the story but Officer Hernandez’s character didn’t seem right. I wish there was a little more back history on him. Everything else about the story was really good. "

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The damaged one

"I liked it.... To bad for Hernandez.... All the love ❤️"

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Such a ❤ heartfelt story!!!!!

"To author 💕: there were some grammatical errors, not that bad I couldn't understand the storyline. This was such a heartfelt storyline right from the getco. Filled with realistic scenarios with drugs, going through the system & drug rehab, jealousy, obsession, suicide, young love & strong bonds. The storyline was not drawn out, was short, sweet & straight to the point. I enjoyed reading this can't-put-down book. I felt attached to your characters. I'm glad Carlos had a loving & very supportive family who not only took in but unconditionally loved Madi. ❤ they make such a strong, compatible, supportive, loving couple 💑. I'm glad they were ok to have a relationship with Hernandez's parents. It's a shame what happened to him in the end. This was an amazing, moving can't-put-down book. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing your awesome imagination, talent and this book with us readers 😊 😀!!"

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The Damaged One

"This was an amazing story 🥰🥰🥰🥰"

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Damaged one

"What does redemption look like? For Maddison it’s being rescued from an abusive ex, cleaning up and learning to live and love. Acceptance, redemption, hope. A fast paced powerful story. Well done!"

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The Damaged One

"This book is really based on true live events and that's is more why it kept me on my toes and glue stuck to it.. it has big lessons to learn.. mostly is Judgement, open minded, true love, communication, understanding, support, faith, etc.. love it... welldone.. a little improvement on Grammar will help but that surely doesn't come in the way to read this amazing story.. Welldone 👏👏👏"

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The damaged one

"I absolutely love this story I have no complaints. It was so interesting and surprising that that the main character went through so much but pulled through and did amazing. I hope their will be another part to this story. "

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Sweet and exciting 🌺

"Love how sweet and exciting this story is, how can you not love Carlos - he is the best 🌺 really well written adorable story 🌺 "

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The damaged one

"Wow,great story thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Great 👍

"Are you going to have a second book to this? I love this book. "

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