Inkitt
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Love ❤️ and Basketball 🏀

"This was such a good story. From the chance meeting, whirlwind romance, to the trials and tribulations of celebrity life and deranged exs, this story had it all. You did such a good job describing what being a special education teacher is like from day to day. Outside of being in education, I dont think I've ever heard it described so well. 👏 👏 👏 The play by play description of the games was so well done I thought I was there. I only have one small suggestion for improvement. There were several places when you switched back and forth from 1st person to 3rd person, there were times where it got a little confusing. You write so well in first person, changing the little bit of 3rd person to 1st will improve the clarity of your story. Overall I highly recommend this book to all. Great job and keep writing! I can't wait to read more of your work "

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Greetings and appreciation

"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on instagram: eloi.se78319 "

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Lovely story

"I enjoyed it, great writing "

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Cute Love Story

"I enjoyed reading your book. Just perfect! I admire their love and respect for each other and for their families. Well written!!! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻"

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