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What is your opinion?

I can’t wait for the next update

"I liked the book in general. I don’t think the spelling was too bad like the other reviews were saying. I would recommend this to other people because it’s really good. There isn’t any smut so I think it would be okay for like 12+. I hope in the future that it has a little smut but ya know, I like the story"

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Loved it so far

"I like the book a lot so far. I think the writer did a great job. I would def recommend the book to my friends and family. The spelling needs some work but other than that its a great story. I love how the author didn't over use the word "said" and somehow wrote a variation of words. The characters she made are so beautiful and I love them. My personal favorite character Raven because of her attitude and I overall love this. I hope that the author continues with this amazing book. I love it."

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I'm the author so I'm being biast

"I don't know about the punctuation or grammar cuz it glitches out, also I'm used to using shortcut words like cuz, tho, etc. Next, the writing style I like cuz... I wrote it so yea. The plot is okay because I created this as an escape from my writers block because I had an assignment due and I thought if i wrote a story I wouldn't get graded on it would help me with a story I would be graded on cuz logic. Overall the story could use a few tweaks but as my first actual book for the public I would say its pretty average, not bad but not the best."

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