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Loving short story

"Wish there was more to the story but it was good. "

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Yea

"Really liked story Loved the sex"

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Practice makes perfect

"Oh my goodness! Love this!! Please continue this story! I’m so into it . I would love to see how they continue, is she pregnant? Does her father find them already married with a baby?? "

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Practice Makes Perfect

"I wish it wasn’t a short story lol. It was good with strong characters. "

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Practice Makes Perfect

"I liked this short story could’ve used a little bit more character development but considering it was a short story it was fine. A little surprised by the ending but thrilled they were able to escape her father. Was wondering if there is more to the story that will be developed"

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