A WHISPER IN THE WIND

"So, here's my honest opinion: It's not a bad story at all but the grammar errors and other technical errors turns the reader off. The plot is Okay and I guess with few improvements it would be a lot better! Good luck! Here's a tip: For the grammatical errors, you can use "Pro-writing Aid" or any other editing apps! (Btw, my grammar isn't perfect either...so..I have no right to criticize others but it's just my simple opinion and sorry in-case, I offended you)"