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Treat You Better 18+

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Summary

He can see she deserves better. Can he be the one to do that for her?

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
30
Rating
4.8 9 reviews
Age Rating
18+

Don’t get involved

Tanner PoV

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I'm queuing at the checkouts. It's busy in this little convenience store. Guess everyone's like me, moving back to student accommodation for university life to get into full swing again.

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You can see the freshers from a mile off. All smiles and eager to get to know people, make friends.

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I'm finally close to paying. I'm shattered and just wanna buy my food and beers, and get back to my shitty shared home.

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Then, I see her.

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She's talking to whoever she's serving, sitting behind the counter, pulling off the work uniform well.

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Her hair is tied up in a messy bun. She's not smiling, she clearly has some sass to her, some spunk, I like it.

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She serves the next guy, in front of me, he asks what's the cheapest loose tobacco, she tells him off the top of her head in a bored tone, he buys it. He stinks. He throws the coins on the counter, snatches the packet and rushes out rudely.

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"Oh he's nice" I mutter and she rolls her eyes.

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"Need a bag?" She asks in a bored voice.

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"Please, one" she passes me a bag.

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She scans my shopping, I just watch. Earning a weird look when she's done and I haven't rushed to pack.

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I see her names Livvie, her name badge.

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"So Livvie, you a student?" I ask casually. I don't know why but I feel I need to know more about her.

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"I'm not Livvie. And yes" she tells me pressing buttons on the till.

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"ID?" She asks and I smirk, pulling out my ID.

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She raises an eyebrow, looking to me. I see she's looking at my tattoos. She checking me out?

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She looks back to the ID, smirks and hands it back.

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She passes me my beers and I get my card out.

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"£27" she tells me.

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"So you know my name, what's yours?"

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"Anyone who's name is Kent... I don't think should know my name" she tells me handing me the receipt.

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"Alright, see you about Livvie" I wink and leave the shop.

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***

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It's pissing it down and my fucking flatmates finished all my fucking milk.

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Swear whoever fucked me over will regret it.

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I rush to the shop, pulling my hood down as I enter.

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Ah, she's working. Instantly I don't mind my flat mates. Drink my milk whenever you want fuckers.

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I go to the chillers, pull out a milk, then head to the checkouts.

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I've seen her twice, both times, she plays hard to get. It's good for my ego.

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Some guy is there leaning over the counter at her. She's smirking at him.

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Shouldn't he surprised another guy is interested. She's hot.

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She leans back and he looks over his shoulder giving me a flat look.

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"Serve quick" I hear him tell her.

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She doesn't meet my eyes as she serves me. "£1.10" she mutters biting the inside of her cheek. She ok?

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I see her name badge is missing today, not even the Livvie one to humour customers.

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"Alright?" I ask her as I pay contactless.

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"Fine" she tells me tightly.

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I nod slowly, she passes me the receipt, I take it, pick up the milk.

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"Take care babe" I wink to her, she just looks away quickly.

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The rude guy just blocks the door.

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I stare at him. My tattoos, my big build, my 6"3 height. I can be quite intimidating.

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"What?" I ask the bloke.

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He has the balls to step forward to square up to me? Hilarious.

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"Don't talk to my girl. You hear me?" He looks up to me, he's maybe just shy of 6 foot?

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I step forward. Closing the gap, making it clear I'm bigger than him in more than just height.

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"Fuck. Off" I tell him flatly.

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We stand there, staring.

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He finally steps back and I carry out on of the shop.

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I get a few steps away, then something makes me go back.

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I turn and walk back. When the door opens I see the pretty girl behind the counter, the fucker speaking shit. I hear "you worthless cunt" and I cut him off.

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"What the FUCK?"

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"Don't get involved shithead" he turns to me, his nose flaring.

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I know I'm pissed off and I see him consider backing down. He should.

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"You have no fucking clue what you're getting yourself into" he threatens.

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"Are you alright?" I ask Not Livvie. Her head nods, but I see her eyes. She's scared.

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"Oi. Don't ignore me" the fucker steps forward. I do too.

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"I'm not talking to a piece of shit like you" I shake my head.

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"Don't ever talk to my girl again" he tells me and I smile. A terrifying full smile.

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"I think I'll do as I please"

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I look to the girl again. She's nodding slightly. I feel bad, awful.

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She shouldn't be with someone like him. I barely know her but I know nobody deserves that.

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***

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Saturday. Party night.

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I can't be bothered.

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I head downstairs, music blaring, people laughing, talking.

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I grab a beer from the fridge, open it, and turn to lean on the kitchen counter, assessing the room.

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Then I spot her, the Not Livvie girl.

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She's leaning against the shed in the garden. Alone. Swigging her beer.

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Only polite for me to say hello, she's in my home after all.

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I finish my beer and grab another, then head out.

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She watches me walk towards her, I can't read her expression.

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Her eyes look me over. I think she likes my tattoos? Most girls do.

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"Checking me out Livvie?" I smirk as I get close.

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"You look like a drug dealer"

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"Talk about judging a book by its cover" she raises an eyebrow "maybe I'm not all bad, like you clearly think I am"

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She scoffs. I feel myself smirk.

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"What? Are you my knight in shining armour to come save me from my boyfriend or something?" She banters. I like her.

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"You want me to be?" I lick my lips as I step closer a little. She looks to my mouth.

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"No. I don't need saving" she rolls her eyes and looks away from me.

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"Good. Who says I would save you?"

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She doesn't move. I step a little closer, talking a little quieter.

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"What if I was to cause more harm than good? You're a good girl"

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She looks back to me, looks up to meet my eyes.

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"I'm not" she seems defensive?

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"What? You not a good girl?" She gives me a flat look. "Sorry, no you're not, you're a good woman, right?"

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"No" she replies softly. Her eyes to go my lips again. I can't help but look at hers.

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"What? You got daddy issues and wanna be a good girl?" I feel her tense, her eyes keep flitting to my eyes, then my lips.

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"What? You want me to call you daddy? Get over yourself" she surprises me and pushes past me.

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I reach out to stop her. Gently.

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She turns back to face me quickly.

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"If you know what's good for you, you'd let me go" she tells me, it's not a threat, it's like a warning. Her voice is soft. Unexpected.

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"If.. you know what's good for you" I step closer to her "you'd avoid my bedroom. Second left, first floor" I wink to her.

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Her mouth opens slightly. Then closes.

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I let her go and walk off back inside, sipping my beer.

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does this mean you will not be updating on wattpad anymore?

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LaBeachBabe04 ... chapter ending had 03, took a bit to find the WP version

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i like him,straight 2 the point 😜😜

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