What is your opinion?
OMG
"Thank you 🙏 for a beautiful book. It was hard to put down. I’ll reread the book soon. I love you so much "
... Ready For It (BoyxBoy)
"I like the characters and the plot even though it's a bit confusing. I mean, the character of the kings aren't clearly stated. Their names also. Or I just missed the part. The plot is confusing because it's not that detailed. The sudden change from the characters and confusing dialogues. And, the characters' side (are they good or bad) are confusing. I dislike how the main protagonist, Gabriel is one of the wealthy people but it seemed like people don't know it or something? It's like he's not rich and just like a normal person I got confused there. Gabriel also often will say he doesn't have friends but what about his little group of friends? Are they just acquaintances to him? I'm confused there too. I would recommend this to people who like to express reading. This book is overall fun and entertaining to read. I've done reading this in a day. It's addicting. Some of the tenses were wrong. Some sentences weren't complete. I'm not that good myself but I noticed it. I hope the author would write more. I'm not sure if this book is discontinued or something. I just hope that they would update. This book is amazing. Truthfully saying. "
Love it
"When is your next update?"
I love it
"I loved the book The writing style The plot everything was amazing and intriguing it was amazing "
Nice novel .but can't guess with whom of the three kings he'll be paired with😍
"It's really eye catchy and I think I wanna give it a try. Can't recommend this novel cause I'm new on inkitt so.. sorry I guess. But I like this story so far and I'm gonna love it too that's for sure . Keep it up"
Nice starter
"I'm sure if you continue you'll grow into a wonderful writer, the grammar is well.. not good, and it's too dramatic to a point that you know it wouldn't have gone like that, and because of the writing style it is sometimes hard to understand the plot, nonetheless thank you for writing ❤️ don't take this as an insult, but a correction that you can most definitely work on💕, and don't just listen to me I'm sure I didn't explain everything well enough "
Lot of work for the moment.
"So, first of all, I do love the concept of the story even if that's really a classic scenari for this genre. However you need to really put your attention on one thing : you write as if you were talking. Take some books and pay attention on how it's written, the ponctuation, the verbs, the tense etc. We feel like it's a bit immature. Like if you are young, or like if English is not your first language I don't know. The new character we are discovering in this last chapter, you should have introduced him sooner, in order to build some suspens I think. Keep up the good work! "
