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Nice job so far, but check your grammar and spelling.
""If you feel like you're drowning, God is always there to pull you out of the water." This chapter is so short, but it's also very touching. However, because of the wording and grammar, that's one of the only things that I understand. Anyway, keep writing! It's the effort that counts! :) Once you write more, I'll edit my review cause it's too early to tell what your writing style or plot is. :) (BTW, are you a Christian? Cause I am, but I'm not sure which god you're referring to...)"
