Inkitt
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I wish there was more of the story to read

"The female main character is very interesting. There isn't enough story to understand stand why but I enjoyed the chapters that have been posted. I wish there was more to read."

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I think it is a good story. I like our male main character c and female main character very much already. I am hoping to see some character development from Jocelyn. I can tell she has been through a lot. And has a lot of trauma. I could be wrong though

"I like the book. This piece of art couldn't have come at a better time than this. I really needed this so thank you very much for it. It is much appreciated "

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