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What is your opinion?

I love it

"Ahh i love it "

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I love it

"Love the story! It’s slightly perverted, no fussing from me. Slight drama. And tease then nasty. I love foreplay"

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Yes daddies

" I like vit"

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Yes daddy's

"I like the relationship with Val and seb. The other two men are on my bad list."

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The story

"OKAY SO FIRST OFF, THIS STORY IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!! I LOVE IT SO SO SO SO MUCH AND IT'S AMAZING. I DON'T WANT IT TO END HERE PLEASE, BRO THIS STORY KEPT ME GOING THROUGH MY DEPRESSION DURING SCHOOL, I WAS SO HAPPY TO END SCHOOL AND READ ANOTHER PAGE. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE DONT END THE STORY HERE, IT CANT END HERE, I HATE HER DAD. ALSO BEING THAT SHE'S OBVIOUSLY GOING BACK TO THE BROTHERS *EYEROLL*, UHHH PUT MORE "SPECIAL STUFF" IN THERE, IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN *WINK WINK* AHHAHAAH- IM SORRY- OKAY- UM- PLEASE DONT END THE STORY I LOVE IT I LOVE YOU YOUR AN AMAZING AUTHOR!!!"

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Great read!

"I finished reading this a bit ago and I’ve come back to rate it. This was the first Inkitt book I have read and I’m not disappointed. I can see why some wouldn’t enjoy it but personally the plot kept me hooked and it was easy to read. Keep up the great work!"

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It great story ☺️

"I loveeee it a lotttt"

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Yes Daddies

"The plot and characters are amazing in this book! I love the way every character is portrayed and how we get to learn their personality through every chapter with twists and turns. I’d highly recommend this book to anyone! It’s my third time re-reading xx Emotions are played through the words wonderfully <3 "

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Amazing😍😫

"I like Valerie and Alex and I would recommend this to anyone whom likes a bit of smut I’m not done with the book so idk if there’s a lot of smut"

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I’m in loveee

"I got the app just to read the book and it was totally worth it! The plot is amazing and i finished the book in two days because i couldn’t shop reading! (Maybe consider editing the grammar??) "

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Yes.. daddies

"I love how it was written the plot of the story is amazing and overall I just love this book I would totally recommend❤️"

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Yes .. daddies

"I loved this book. I really want more to this story. I want to know what happens next."

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Yes daddies

"Good story teller. Like plot. Supence Interestind and good developed characters. Story keeps you interested and coming back."

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Yes....daddies

"This book is amazing and the more u read is the more captivated u are and the plot of the story encourages u to want to read the book so overall I think it's spectacular and keep up the great work blackwings888"

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i love thisss

"i love this omg. i love books like this. with one girl and more than one older guy. it makes me wish i had older brothers to hang out with. anyways. i love this book and i know imma be annoyed when i finish it. also one thing. please correct the "their, there and they're"s 💃"

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Awesome story

"Amazing story. Finished it in 2 days, It had me hooked."

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Yes... Daddies!

"There is some grammer issues along with some spelling not sure if it part of Valerie's lines or not but I noticed it but it has an amazing plot and really good structure."

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I LOVETHIS

"This book was amazing and interesting throughout the whole book. PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE - I cried for the last few chapters because I want them to end up together I swear this cannot end like this!!! PLEASE CONTINUE I LOVE THIS SO MUCH AND I CANNOT LIVE KNOWING THIS PHENOMENAL BOOK ENDED THE WAY IT DID!!!"

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Yes...daddies

"I really like the plot it is really smooth and everyrhing makes sense its not scatter brained! Good Job really enjoy it sad I am almost done"

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Yes daddies

"I really like the book, I got this app just to read it "

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