What is your opinion?
Creative concept
"Hi Author, I have read your poem, and I really liked it. You have defined each character very well, and you have kept your work in such a way that it stands out. You could become an even better writer by continuing in this direction. It would be an honor for me if I could work with you as well. I am a commission artist, and I have worked on a lot of character art and book covers. If you think it's a good fit, I would love to create something for you as well. Discord: lilyjackson0295 Instagram: lily.jackson321 Here is the few socials i mentioned you can be in touch with me in here, if you prefer any other social for chat so kindly let me know. Thank you for the consideration. "
The lion, the mouse and the wolf
"Such a good story lots of twists that i didn’t see coming. This is very well written with a good plot and good characters. I especially enjoyed the descriptive spicy scenes! They were sexy hot!! 😁🥵😈"
Background
"This story would definitely benefit from some world building. The technical aspects are a little weird and while you figure them out throughout the story, it does seem like a little bit of information about where this takes place, the level of technology, abilities of the people, etc. would greatly enhance the story. There are also a number of writing errors, spelling, punctuation, grammar, etc. It does keep me enthralled though so I can't complain too much."
Uniquely Intriguing
"Enjoyed the beginning of the book. Then found it frustrating, and wanted to stop reading it due to all the drama, but kept with it enjoying several of the characters. This book is outside if my typical books, but did enjoy it nonetheless."
