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What is your opinion?
Really good wish to see more and I hope to keep reading when it dose keep going
" This was good I would recommend this to my friends And I dislike the teacher dying at the start because I thought it was going to be the teacher x student from that teacher but it wasn't and I like the plot dynamics that you the writer gave to this story so props on you for this"
Bad Technical Writing Skills
"Grammar-wise, it’s not good. There are a lot of incomplete/run-on sentences. It also sounds like it was written by a child, and it probably was. Story could be good if author continues to practice writing."
