What is your opinion?
Only just begun.
"I have enjoyed what I have read so far. It is difficult to rate the overall story and the plot as so far Al is just setting the scene and introducing us to her characters. Her style is easy to read and her characters are believable. I want to know what happens next and how the story develops. (A sympathetic eye to tidy up the spelling and punctuation when the story is finished would help future readers.)"