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What is your opinion?
Is there full story to read??
"Its really interesting. "
EROTIC as the tag suggests .
"It's one of those rarest stories that made me feel good. "
The sin
"I really don't want this to come out nasty or anything as that is not my intention but it was really hard to read with the wording that you were using It was hard to get into and enjoy again due to the way you worded it so please don't take offence but maybe practice your writing on paper and then you might see where you could improve the book the plots were fantastic and I honestly think you are a talented author I just think you could be better "
