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Bridge (not) too far

"A new glimpse into who my new friend is.. With each story, a layer unwrapped.. sometime ripped off. This one is easy to love. Your writing, as always, crystal like leaded glass.. yet buoyant, unsinkable. Always a flavor both poignant and promising."

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Comedy gold

"A wonderfully sarcastic and darkly funny narrator. Funniest story Ive read from this author, hope theres more coming. Ive never seen such a funny fishing failure, yet a weird win at the end! Great!"

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Is it comedy? Or life?

"Sometimes comedy and real life collides, this fishing story seems one such gem that tells this.. I laughed my sides off at a few points! quirky and true to life humor, nothing fake, this is the best kind of laughs! I love it."

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Fishing 4 dummies, haha

"I found this gem searching through true stories and humor. What a funny true story, but its a subtle humor, talking about innocence,young wit, combined with total ineptness. A must read if you want a good chuckle. This style is so good, im about to read the other stories this author posted. If these are actually true stories, they are very different from what I've read before, well worth my time"

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Funny but true

"This story is really funny. Not comedy funny but life, irony funny. It shows how simplest pleasures in life sometimes turns out not what we hoped or expected but yet we get some enjoyment of it. Lucky warms - shows huge empathy of the writer towards animals. Overall very good short story that will put smile on your face."

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