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The white lioness

"Great story, I truly enjoyed it "

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THE WHITE LIONESS

"Another amazing story❣️ I really enjoyed reading it. The characters were great. By the way, did Ryan and Shannons mother get together?"

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Best intentions with terrible consequences

"Our protagonist has strong emotions throughout this story. I understand her pain at her father’s insistence of a chosen mate. It was amazing to read they were fated. It truly was sad the father had to die without a reconciliation he did raise her with love, until his twisted thoughts took over. This story left me feeling bitter sweet. "

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Enjoyable!!

"This book was a great read. Found myself caught up in the action within the chapters. Several times I vocalized my thoughts of the chapter I was reading. Will be reading this book again."

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the white lioness?

"this was such a great book!"

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The white lioness

"Muy, buena y narada historia. Gracias! ¿Pero que pasó con su madré?"

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The white lioness

"I feel like some stuff was left unfinished. Did Ryan and Shannon's Mom get together? Did Derek find a mate? Did April? Great book overall. "

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The white lioness

"Wow!! Loved it !!!!!! Thank you so much for sharing your story with me "

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The white lioness

"I really enjoyed the story it was sad how the king was forcing people to mate to see if they could have more children than fated mates so that was sad. It's kind of like a shotgun wedding. In the end, everything worked out to meet her real dad and then they had a beautiful boy and now she’s a caring twin girl I think it’s wonderful I love this kind of story."

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Fantastic story

"I love this story so much. Wish it was on Galatea so I could add it to my library"

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A bit like a teen story

"The writing seems to be a young person. It seems more like a teens story"

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Good book!

"It's a good book. The characters are cool. I can't wait to see how it ends. "

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I just love it I like the story I like the pot I like everything about it

"I really enjoy reading this book I can't wait until some more updates it's got me intrigued on how it's going to end"

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M24

"Love everything "

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The white lion

"It's a good read. Has kept my interest. I love books about shifters and I chose to read them over many other stories. "

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Love the strength of Shannon

"Im like it alot so far . Love the strength of Shannon. Im even more mad at her parents. "

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÷eeeeeer

"Good reading "

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Robert didn’t deserve to be a Villain

"Yes, Robert did not deserve to be the villain at all, first of all. He is just a pained mate, who took out his pain on his pack and became obsessed with what he couldn’t provide. Shannon is a brat Ares is 😏 Ryan is meh The pack members are the most disloyal Lion pride in existence, it’s giving Scar. The book was good though"

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Good

"I can understand her anger"

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