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Review
"Love the plot "
Soren has my admiration
"It takes some serious heart and talent to be able to write brother dynamics this well. Soren, Dorian, and Rey’s love for each other provides a foundation that allows this story to thrive. I feel that you honestly could have written anything after those first few chapters of brotherly love, and it would have been great. Thankfully, the result is just that. Soren’s relationship with Ashlynn is one that’s built on trust and growth. I appreciate that they have a very solid connection, and that it took time for them to rely on each other. Your writing style is fantastic. The suspense is high, the fear is genuine, and the love is real. Soren’s struggles with being the eldest definitely reach me to the point of having to choke back tears. As for constructive criticism, there are a few structural mistakes like Soren’s thinking being in square brackets and then switching to italics, and a lack of backstory for Brady, but other than those little things, everything else is great. You have written something wonderful. (P.S.) A printed copy is something I would very much be interested in. I will, also, gladly stay awesome, and hope the same for you!"
