Inkitt
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Please keep writing

"Love the story I need more "

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It's a lovely story depicting all the emotions of a teenager.

"I loved everything about the story.....an alpha male with a teenager.....an experienced human and a inexperienced little soul....I just expect that the protagonist will realise everything he has done and get equally punished for that. And learn the values from the teenager."

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I like it so much it give the reader all about reality

"It set up is good and it would recommend Joan to come and read...revenge mixed with emotions cause unnecessary confusion.a bove all I like the themes"

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