Nelumbella

"A wonderful fairytale! With some well known old tales in it. Grammatical some mistakes, that I saw, even while English is not my language and I am not so good in writing it. But it is a beautiful story, from beginning to the end."

Nelumbella

"The book overall had one of the best story lines and I am glad to say that I loved every bit of it.It did have some grammatical mistakes but that didn’t affect the curiosity within me.I would actually recommend this book to all my friends, family, and relatives that I know. Overall In the end this book left me satisfied"

Excellent writing, Enchanting characters and Awesome story line

"This is the very first review I have ever written on this app.. and this book is fucking fantastic I will recommend it to everyone... Thank you for making my day.."

😍 ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤️

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Nelumbella

"This was good. I thought it was cute. The way it was written was about perfect going back n forth."

Awesome story

"Nice story..loved it"

A LOT OF GOOD ABOUT THIS

"First I would like to say before anything else, the story is setup that it has potential to have both a prequel and a sequel. There could probably even be side books written for it to fill in any gaps of time in the story. I think Charter has to be my favorite Character The story is great. Character development is there, environment is nice and there is a lot going on for the imagination. There are a TON of funny innuendos in the story. It's like a fairytale for adults. Sort of reminds me of why Shrek was so successful. This book would easily sell to a wide range of audiences and I hope it gets a print or ebook sometime. It would be nice. Fantasy readers would like it. Adventure readers would like it. Comedy readers would like it. There is a lot going on with it. I remember this being in a previous contest and doing extremely well Hopefully Inkitt takes a second glance at this and considers it as a piece they can publish because I would honestly grab a copy. At least an Ebook. EDIT: I would also like to note that I've been given access to a newer and updated version of this novel from its writer. It has some things added to it that were removed probably to keep it more child friendly. It's likely that if Inkitt doesn't take the story that some other publishing entity will. Too much potential here."

OH my god

"I love this story . I am on chapter 7 and I haft to force myself to stop reading it.. Will you post more stories in the future?"

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well done

"i really enjoyed this book i found it very interesting to read and look forward to more from the author"

How to get someone to neglect their moderating job

"enjoyed reading Nelumbella to the point of leaving streams I have been moderating for to read more of it."

good job

"even though this isn't the type of story i would normally read it was well written and interesting the whole way through the story and i would enjoy reading more about brevis and the captains adventures"

Nelumbella Review

"I didn't know what to expect going into the story, but I was pleasantly surprised. The story nicely ties in elements of other faerie tales in a fun way. The characters are interesting and their arcs are cleverly linked together. There are some twists and turns that keep the story from being too formulaic and some classic tropes get molded into something fresh. The characters are well written and are consistent to their characters. The world is believable and the actions of those within it make sense. There are glimpses of an expansive world beyond what the story focuses on which solidify the foundation of what we do see. With everything from humor to romance and a few dark moments, the story is well rounded and doesn't rely any a single genre to compel the reader further. There are a handful of typos and grammatical errors sprinkled throughout. So I had to dock a point there. But it's well written and definitely worth the read. TL;DR: Read it. Stop reading reviews and just go read it."

great( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

"best book ever( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°),i have nvr ever read any books before,but this book changed my opinion( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)"

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Imagination+

"The author has an incredible and passionate imagination and the text draws you in. The story mixes everyone's own insecurities and challenges into a fantasy storyline and comes from the heart."

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A fun read!

"A simple writing style that works well for the fairy tale genre. Interesting and fun with a good bit of humor thrown in. Check it out!"

Nelumbella review

"I really enjoyed the story. I thought the characters were well written and that the political themed tones were relevant to today's society. Mike Dennis"

amazing I love it

"Such an easy reader I can picture the Arthur reading the book back to me. Which means I can imagine all these characters in the book. I'm really enjoyed reading this book. If this book was in a bookstore I would totally buy it."