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alpha and his special mate

"Exciting reading full of surprises and just keeps on. getting better.cant put it down"

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Tracey

"Ah what a shame it’s a good story "

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Aweesome

"Awesome story. Amazing breath taken. Lovely. "

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Sad

"I would never had started if I knew you left. Sadly I refuse to pay 30 plus for a book read. Good luck in your future this is shaping up to a good novel"

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great book

"im loving this book"

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Good

"Good story and good plot"

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The Alpha and his special mate

"Great story and plot loved the characters. I can not afford to go to a pay for chapter site, so I will wish you well and move on to other stories on this amazing site. Good luck in your future endeavors."

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Raj

"Narration is very good"

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The Alpha and his special mate

"Good so far. Can't wait to see how the plot twists from here"

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"🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤"

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The Alpha and His Special Mate

"I feel you might be novice writer however I appropriate the effort you are making by sharing your story with us. It feels like a story that I have read previously only a little more quick and to the point. i did notice around chapter 10 maybe that the story took on its own life and went in a different enough direction to not be to similar to the other story. I wish you would share a little more of Liam's and Ava's interactions and smaller scenes with them, it feels like you are trying to breeze past the beginning to get to the "good parts". i don't mind having more chapters :D. there are some grammatical and spelling/wrong word errors but I'm sure once you go back and edit those can be fixed. Looking forward to the finished story! Also don't listen to the a**holes that have nothing constructive to say :D happy writing!"

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Too bad it is a knock off of a dream Story the storyline is My Miracle Luna

"I started reading it but it is clearly following My miracle Luna from the dream app. They changed names but it is still the same sometimes word for word."

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Not happy

"If I knew what this was going to happen I wouldn’t have read your book not happy"

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The Confused Writer

"Has very many spelling mistakes, poor grammar and writing skills, a good story but mixed up chapters... "

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Hmmmmm

"U people should just stop it’s annoying"

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