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What is your opinion?
NEEDS A LITTLE WORK BUT OTHER THAN THAT I LOVE IT
"The grammar and punctuation is a little off but other than that i love this story good job!"
My best friends brother
"Need more chapters to read"
Looks like Zachary is brainwashing Marissa
"Different way"
Nicely done
"The story line is really good. I just wish that I knew what happened in between, the first time she told him she loved him, and now. Or what the argument was about... Other than that great job, Author!"
Good
"Good story"
My best friends brother
"I didn’t like that it needed so early that’s really it"
Like the plot....
"Love the plot but a lot of spelling and grammatical errors."
