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Devine purpose

"Thank you so much, you are an Earth angel. God works in mysterious ways. I have been struggling with the same question as Cal did for years now,getting myself into some dark thoughts. You have helped me without even knowing that you would. God send your msg to me once i was ready to receive it. Thank you and thank God. My soul is at rest now, i can shine again:)"

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The end is 😏😏

"What a plot. Indeed. Divine love. 😍😍 well written. Stupendous. 👏👏👏🤩🤩🤩"

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Say "I Love You", Cal!!!

"I like the action scenes, and obviously the romantic scenes even though they were more like torture for her. I liked the family union and relationship. I also liked its moral and religion point of view since I am a Pentecostal. Greetings from Puerto Rico. "

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Divine purpose

"This is a book you don't read in a rush."

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This story is really amazing

"I liked the fact that the author was able to combine Christianity and fantasy to make an amazing book. The book teaches us that trust comes out of love. I really don't dislike anything about the book. It's not perfect due to typing errors but it's quite interesting. I would recommend this book to practically anybody cause it's a really nice book"

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Noooo!!!

"Where’s the rest of the story??? I was truly hoping for a better ending than this. Very captivated by this story!! Easy to follow and flowed extremely well. Not as much humor as I hoped there would be. Enjoyed all the men characters as they were all strong. Didn’t care so much for the women as they seemed more like trinkets to admire. It seemed like the women had trivial conversations that was irrelevant to anything of essence. Truly appreciated the family and their tight bond and genuine concern and care for each other. There’s an appreciation of how it subtly shows how much temptation there is all around us and we are tempted by so much that we are not even aware of the simplest sinful things and it is overlooked because society has accustomed us to be accepting of it and we don’t even realize it . I.E. having to do simple chores without malice, or babysitting (keeper and caring for another life). I don’t understand how in the beginning the boyfriend is always around every corner when she least expects it but towards the end, she has to call him to show up. Curious to know what the bounty reward was for the family. Look forward to more stories from this writer!! Please improve the endings. "

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Divine purpose

"This is awesome! It's a great awakening to the reality of the life we live. Love is the greatest of all,and it can never fail. More of God's grace to you,it's a job well-done"

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Divine Purpose

"I loved every minute of your book, loved the storyline. You are really talented and I admire your writing skills. Thank you "

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Divine purpose

"I loved everything about this book😍I love that it is so different and funny and unpredictable👏👏"

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Good vs Evil worth reading!

"This was a good story. I liked the twists on good and evil. A little tweeting needed on the grammar especially using correct words and phrases but it does not take away from being able to enjoy the story. Thanks to the author for sharing their talent! "

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Good story

"Really liked this story but the ending made me go "what!!" wished the ending will give more and be better. Can't wait for your sequel. "

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Divine Purpose

"Very engrossing. Will there be a sequel?"

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Dibina purpose

"Oh ma hod i love plot twist between the heroin and the hero💛💛💛"

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Awesome

"Magnificent "

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Wow..!!

"The book was great..!! :) Unexpected turns and twists were the best. I love Laken and Callias. I just wish you could hve given an epilogue or an extra chapter. We don’t know what happened to them? Did Cal turn human? Did she get her happily ever after? Is there a sequel? "

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Phenomenal!

"Absolutely amazing! I finished the entire book in two days, and couldn't put it down! I have never read anything like this novel before. Its hard to find a good Christian book to read on here! Hopefully there will be a sequel (wishful thinking)."

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Divine purpose

"wow wow this was absolutely great, awesome. more grace! it has been a long interesting journey reading this book. the language, stile, vivid description, punctuation... was just so good. l personally enjoyed it!"

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Devine Purpose

"I love the relationship between Cal and Laken (took me forever to memorize her name). Despite some spelling errors and I think some under explained or unneeded aspects of the story, the story is overall a good story. With some editing, I think it could be a really popular story. ❤️✨"

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Loving Cal

"Must read..just awesome but you should really tell us more..did they have a happy ending? Hope you give us a sequel our dear author..just great plot perfect 😍😍"

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Divine Purpose

"Same plot in between is repearing again and again but the way the mysteries are oened is quite good... Saying of recommendations there aren't any because if your novel really becomes that popular then surely people will read it and again there are lots and lots of grammatical mistakes but still it was a good one for light reading...👍🏻👍🏻❤"

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