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A sweet story with unpredictable twists and turns.For even and any hopeless romantics

"Its the sweetest story with twists and turns and unpredictability.I just dont like the waiting period for the next chapter."

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San

"Great story so far"

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Playing pretend

"Love this book. Everyone should read it as a destresser. "

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Good

"I like it I love romance novels "

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So far so good

"I like the story is good, I'll keep reading it "

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Always a fun trope

"I’m enjoying this story a lot. I love fake relationships. And these two are sweet. "

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WHO ARE WE FOOLING?

"The story line is very interesting and captivating, I can picture the characters and feel like I am in their life.it is so real"

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Update

"Don't leave me hanging"

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Awesome read s far

"I love this book so far! Can’t wait for another chapter!"

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Oh wow

"Look at him!! Ok I see you I’m happy for them "

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Who's fooling who

"Oh wow . What a romantic st ory.. loved reading it. "

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Ramokone

"Beautiful plot ❤"

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Already got me hooked

"I just want to say thank you. Already I like this book and not just because the story line and how you word it is profound but I very much appreciate how little there were of corrections in spelling. I'm very much enjoying this book. And hoping to see more soon. "

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Who are we fooling

"Loved the characters and story line. I love the fact that this particular rich family were kind and not the choosy kind in terms of their son's partner 😊"

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Who are we fooling

"Great and cute"

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Very interesting, awesomely good

"The emotional role coaster, the strong sense of family, the love the characters have for each other. 💙👍🏽"

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Loving it

"This story is so good so far. I can't wait untill his Mother finds out she's pregnant ❤️❤️❤️. Looking forward to reading more."

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Who are we fooling

"Interesting so far."

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Like

"Like this story so far eager yo read it more on"

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Nice

"Nice story"

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