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I Keep Coming Back

"I read this story a while back, at the time the author was posting regularly. I keep returning in hopes that she has continued with the story, but unfortunately, that has not happened. I will say, that I do not mind the female's character, she is too whiny and conceited for my liking and immature. HOWEVER, Mr. Benedict is just mwah, I love him (Hence, why I still come back to see if there are any updates). "

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This was so good that it made me cry because why did he leave her like 😞, I’m waiting for the next chapter I need to know that happen and why I really hope you continue to write this story

"This was so good that it made me cry because why did he leave her like 😞, I’m waiting for the next chapter I need to know that happen and why I really hope you continue to write this story "

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Mr. Benedict

"Poor River 🥹. I can’t wait to read more "

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Add more chapters make it more spicy

"I really like this book you should expand it marking it more spicy and with more Desire from mr benidict"

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Very interesting!

"This has been an interesting read so far and I really am enjoying it!"

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Mr. Benedict

"I literally love this book so much, the words you use to make the readers feel emotions even tho they aren’t there is absolutely beautiful. How many times i cried over this story! Overall this is a really good story and I love it so much!!❤️"

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Love it!

"This story has all the elements. Great characters, situations and lots of complexity."

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Good to read!

"Nice story But i need more chapters to read right away😀(kidding).Anyway,looking forward to read more of this story."

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Interesting

"Ugh loved it"

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Sir

"I actually really liked this book. Even tho it was a bit short, and ended on a cliffhanger. But it was a really good story."

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Sir

"So much potential, "

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