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Fantasy for the next generation

"So far the world building is pretty great, it goes in depth and immerses the reader into the world. Characters are awesome too- distinct personalities with strengths and flaws. The relationship development is really good too, they definitely have chemistry and ups and downs that are realistic and relatable. Also the tid-bits of humor are natural and funny, nothing ever seems forced or too stiff. Good job author!"

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Good read so far

"Interested to see where it is going "

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Blackthorn

"I enjoyed the characters. Interestingly different from cliches or other fantasy storys. Same goes for world building."

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Easy to read

"I like the style. It is easy to read and understand, even for someone like me whose mothertongue is not english."

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