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When I Saw You

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Summary

Kelly, a wild, adventurous girl has been in a rut ever since her Mom died two months ago. Her Dad has been trying tirelessly to put a smile on her face and to get back the old Kelly, but nothings been working. Meet Deklon, or Dek as he perfers to be called. His Dad just recently was arrested, and Dek hasn't been the same since. He's been very angry and every day he sinks farther into depression. What can help the two teens? One night, both Dek's Mom and Kelly's Dad stumble across a summer camp in Colorado, and everything changes.

Genre
Romance
Author
Maggie
Status
6yrs ago
Chapters
7
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Author's Note

(NOTE! All usernames are from the writing website Wattpad!)


Hey everyone, it's Maggie here! This is a new story inspired by the cover @Jenna_beeene (Thanks Jenna!)

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Now the plot might still be in progress if you are reading this around 12/21/2020

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My inspriarsion for this book was from the cover for the When I Saw You before this one, but the cover didn't fit that story well, and I was stuck for that story, and I wasn't really enjoying writing it, soo I threw that story away. AND MADE THIS ONNEEE. This story is way better and I am really enjoying the plot.

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Credits too:

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@summerbackthen for a bit of advice.

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Colorado for being so romantic and rocky...

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@321Maggie123 for writing this...

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The Charecters:

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Deklon ⬆️

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Kelly ⬆️ (Only she doesn't use lipstick)

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