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Instant family

"So apart from the typos and other little grammatical errors it's a really great.book with a cute plot, would highly recommend but it would be an even better rating after an in-depth edit."

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Good read

"Fab read with great characters. The characters have identifiable personalities which match to the story and provide a sound basis for the story. I can’t wait to find out what happens next."

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MC meet Lioness

"The story is good but you need to check your spelling and your sentences sometimes don’t make sense you cannot translate from your language directly into English try and work out how to write the sentence It could be a brilliant novel "

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Mc meet Lioness

"Great story, good character, only a couple of typos"

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Mc meets lionesses

"I am enjoying the twists and turns in this story it keeps you guessing witch makes it good keep up the great work"

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Its got a good Base line the charctors are veryinteresting idont want to put itsm down

"I. Like. The. Characters, the. Story. Line as. Well"

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Need more

"It's hard to find MC stories to read but now I'm completely hooked on this one. Definitely need to continue it."

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MC meets Lioness

"I’m hooked. Can’t wait to read more and see what happens next. Hopefully real soon "

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MC Meet Lioness

"The book is entertaining so far."

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I like it so far

"It's so far good"

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Really good

"Really good story but need more of story "

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Love

"Love can’t wait to read more"

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Love

"Very good for me to be able to be there in "

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Mc meet lioness

"This needs more to this story. It end the way I did not want it"

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Amazing

"Love the story would love more please"

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Mc meet lioness

"So far I like the book "

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Rough drafty

"I can decipher well, but to me there is a lot of grammatical errors. Plot is wonderful though and look forward to more! "

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MC Meets lioness

"Really struggling with misspelled or missing words. Plots good, characters are easy to invest in"

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Interesting

"A little confusing at times. Misspellings throwing me off. Like the "rough but good as gold guy" stories."

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