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Cold December Eyes: Dark Love Poems

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Summary

I can never tell you why I’m broken. Why my lips tremble at your name. Why my eyes widen at your glance. Why my hands feel strangely empty. (If you enjoy these poems, please Like & Comment.)

Status
Complete
Chapters
10
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Cold December Eyes

I was lost in the woods of winter’s wrath

In cold November

When I met a woman whose eyes were like

Cold December

She sang songs of woe and songs of misery,

She sang bittersweet

She played with words and made up rhymes,

She did this many times

Many times

Empty lines

Many times

I sat beside a fire blowing on an ember

This I remember

A tree had sprouted in my mind, a tree

That grew and grew

For long I could not see the knotted tree,

Or taste the deadly dew

But while I dozed I dreamed and dreamed,

Of falling stars

And the tree whose boughs were blowing

In the wind

It did bend

When I woke there she stood, like the tree

From my dream

She sang a song, and I hummed along

In years bygone


Forever will I remember that cold November

And those eyes

Those cold December eyes that haunt me still

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