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The Pack Girl's Retribution

"Great story, intertwining characters and a good pace. Gripping from start to finish, full of suspense and surprise! Great Read."

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Excellent

"Very developed way of writing. Obviously will recommend for people 18 and above"

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3 guy and a girl

"Want more of this great story"

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Love the book

"I love this book so far please finish"

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Love the mystery...

"Can’t wait to read more, very enticing so far "

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Yayyy!!!

"I was so glad to see that there are another book of this story"

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Outstanding

"As a author I can feel the need of reviews and here i go again, you books never fail to amaze us the plots and storyline everything is just spectacular. And in this book I expect Vanna to be a total badass and somehow I can smell it happen in the future. Thanks again."

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The Pack Girl's Retribution 🐺🐺🐺

"Quite the storyline, I like the 3 mates 🐺🐺🐺 (also in prev book)... lots of originality, sooo much happens in this book, was entertaining for sure😉 Great characters, hope to see more books in this series?? Especially Aviari🔥 I've enjoyed a few stories from this writer 😉 💋Thanks for letting it be read for free💙"

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Different twist

"Different from the ones before"

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Hope To Read More

"To those scanning the comments before reading this story need to read "The Pack's Girl" first. It can be found on www.patreon.com/K_K_S_ Unfortunately KKS was forced to remove it from Inkitt because of complaints due to content. This despite content warnings. Listen people the writer clearly states dark and erotic. So, don't read it if you don't like dark and erotic, because like it or not, some of us do. My review for "The Pack's Girl" are as follows... When reading it on Patreon, I fell in love with Vanquish, I saw a different side of Hunter but still hated Racer. Sorry I just saw very little change is his personality, seeing him as a whining brat. Seeing how the characters evolved and realizing what they were willing to sacrifice to protect her and each other was heart grabbing. Seeing Vanna Rae, a.k.a. Rabbit, develop feelings for one and willing to sacrifice to protect him made you love her that much more. A Truly Excellent Story KKS! Can't wait to read "Pack's Girl Retribution" in full! In which time I will give a full review, right no there isn't enough on Inkitt."

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Pack Girl

"This is an interesting story the writing is a bit amateurish but readable. All in all entertaining."

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The pack girl's Retribution

"Continuing from the pack girl, great teaser at the beginning,. So excited to read Vanna Rae's story an hopefully her mates help her get revenge. Very happy their together an been treating her better.🥰🥰🥰🥰"

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I wish it was on this site

"I wish it was on this site or at least for sale in book form"

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