Inkitt
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Good!

"100% would recommend to all those who's looking for a hero plot story."

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Not sure

"It is good so far "

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The lonely one

"The book has a great story line. Plus has good erotic scenes "

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Interesting plot

"Good Story"

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Loving

"Good flow! "

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Great chapter! Excellent imagery

"Great use of imagery! Fantastic plot"

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beyond twisted

"ya shes so completely in love with Neal blah blah blah not his crazy brother kidnaps her to kill to hurt Neal has her for less than 2 weeks and she is fucking Ethan's brains out and lying to Neal about screwing his brother and repeated lying when ask if she loves his brother honestly disappointing in this book and she deserves nothing put heartache and loneliness sure as shit don't deserve Neal not even crazy brother plan and simple if loved Neal so much she wouldn't have man raped Ethan an Ethan lying about Neal being dead had shit to do with it cause she wanted Ethan to screw her way before that like your books but this one is so far past disappointing "

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beyond twisted

"ya shes so completely in love with Neal blah blah blah not his crazy brother kidnaps her to kill to hurt Neal has her for less than 2 weeks and she is fucking Ethan's brains out and lying to Neal about screwing his brother and repeated lying when ask if she loves his brother honestly disappointing in this book and she deserves nothing put heartache and loneliness sure as shit don't deserve Neal not even crazy brother plan and simple if loved Neal so much she wouldn't have man raped Ethan an Ethan lying about Neal being dead had shit to do with it cause she wanted Ethan to screw her way before that like your books but this one is so far past disappointing "

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