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Mountain

"Not what I had expected as its not part of my normal reads, but it was captivating nonetheless. I actually really enjoyed this book. A couple things through me off as I didn't quite get, but that's probably just my brain. Sad that Marius wasn't 'born from the flame' in the end, but I'm glad the 4 have each other and got to keep their powers."

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Mountain

"Excellent story full of magick! Thanks Author "

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Fun read

"I read one of the authors other books and decided to read this one next. It’s a great story. I thought it was just going to be sex on a mountain 🤣 but it was full of magic, friendship and adventure. It’s a short story so it happens fast. I would definitely read a second book if it was ever created. "

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Mountain

"I enjoyed this well written and edited story but it could have offered so much more. The ending was a bit Meh.... but otherwise a really nice short story "

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Loved it

"Liked this story Really interesting and have a new point of view"

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Oh my .. Soo good.

"Couldn't put it down. A very nice short story that I wish was a full series. Plot line was very well executed. A few grammar things but totally readable . I read it in one night got Soo hooked."

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Mountain

"Story line was good but the ending could of been better "

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Mountain

"This is a rather good story! For the short amount of chapters, there is a lot of detail in the story to make it a really good read. I liked how there wasn't negativity in it and that there wasn't a lot of opposing views. Thanks for sharing your story!!"

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Mountain

"Good storyline and characters. I liked the way they worked better together."

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Opinion

"I don’t think this story was for me. I love the writing style but I feel the plot had a lot of holes "

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