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"The description about the Neko is good. And the plot about shinsou finding her is great, it’s just that the actual story needs more ummm- drama, more emotions. Yk? What happens when Y/N meets the parents, how does Y/N feel, make the story more exciting. If you put more emotion into the story, people will want to read more. Also, I noticed that when I got deeper into the story, your writing got more bland. I mean this in the best way possible. Your truly, Follower of yours."