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Loved it!

"Thanks for the great book!"

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Mesmerizing

"This story is amazing! It is extremely captivating. The warning that it is not edited should be heeded. Although it is in desperate need of editing, the story is so good that you'll gladly mentally fix them and keep going, happily. It's so enrapturing that I stopped reading another book to read this! It's written so well, it's like you can see the characters' expressions. Another amazing novel I love this author! "

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Good story

"Serpahina, was frustrating at times, her helplessness was exhausting to read. But I understand how she grew up humans but her lack of curiosity or knowledge, especially after her childhood traumatised unbelievable. The mystery and plot twist was great. The character development wasn't too bad. Sometimes, we spend too much time reflecting on childhood trauma that will normally hold back a modern human, but forget the time period people of that era grew up in were tough and bounced out of it quickly. Overallits a good read with some grammatical checks and editing required. "

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Interesting

"Great book"

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Im a big fan!

"I have nearly read everything this author has wrote so far and I just love her story lines! Different than anything else and she clearly puts her heart and soul into every single story. This story has my heart and can’t wait to one day read about Axel! Maybe his story is one of love with a witch mate? (Maybe Irene has a daughter) Or maybe his mate is another demon? Two evils together make them tame? Ha! Whatever u decide to write, I’ll be waiting patiently!"

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Captivating

"Although there were some errors in grammar & spelling, (probably from prediction or auto correct just like texting) I was able to understand what a sentence is trying to portray. Great job at keeping readers enthralled with every chapter. I sometimes have to force myself to stop reading. Keep up the wonderful writing and looking forward to your upcoming books!"

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Rogue moon

"It's a good story. But I read the Last to fall series and I like them more. But that doesn't mean I don't want to know what happens in book 2."

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Good

"It's so good. There are a few grammar mistakes, but nothing I couldn't get past. I'm really enjoying it. "

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Absolutely LOVING this book!!!

"I absolutely am loving this book. It's so nice to read a story where the author actually takes her time to develop the story and characters. It doesn't feel rushed or like it's missing too much of the storyline. I also am enjoying that it's spicy but not raunchy. Definitely a refreshing read. "

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Rogue Moon

"Riveting stuff...I absolutely loved it!!!"

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So so so good of a story! What a ride!!

"Never I have thought a werewolves Lycan story can be this good without much erotica. Many werewolves book involve a lot of erotica but this book serves you immense amount of romance, sweet and deep romance far beyond sex, enough amount of skin ships and all physical affection, one great scene of sex, and a great amount of action. By any means not perfect, should author could keep writing and even do some editing, this book and the future books will be on everyone’s shelves."

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Wow

"Cannot put it down"

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Hunters gotta hunt or live in peace ?

"Evil guy was 12 when he killed his entire clan. Are we sure the demon was not him? Thank you for sharing your story with us readers."

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Sera & Damien

"Amazing book! Loved all the characters and the plot. I will surely check your other works. Good job author! ❤"

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Rogue Moon

"Great storyline an original plot unique and the characters were strong which allowed the story to have a steady flow. However it does need a good workout Well Done Author "

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Another great book!

"As always, I love any books from this author. I have read everything from her I can get my hands on. "

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Great

"I really enjoyed reading this book hope to read more like it "

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Rouge Moon

"Interesting story "

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B.Shock goes down to my favourite author list

"Incredible storyline. Im not going to comment on the writing itself since you havent done the edit yet. But ill sooo be waiting for the sequel whenever it comes out :)"

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Good read

"Nice book. Original storyline so it’s refreshing "

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