Inkitt
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Nice story

"The story was quite nice, chapters not too long, nice chemistry between MCs. There were quite a lot of typing errors and grammar mistakes though, which were distracting. Heels/Heals, piercing/paiercing, steak/stake and plenty more. "

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Hot

"The cover is awful. But the story is fun and cute and really hot. Writing could be better though "

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🔥🔥🌶

"Wow si hot j'ai adoré "

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Hihetetlen írás!

"Elképesztő történet, minden képzeletet felülmúló cselekmény, tele feszültséggel, fenomenális írás! Úgy olvastam el a 44 fejezetet , az egész pergett előttem mint egy film."

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Best dancer and lover

"Beautiful love story "

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My private dancer

"This is such a sweet story. It focuses more on relationship building with a little fun time in between . The write makes the characters so engaging . A must read for anyone . I just love this book so much "

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Private dancer

"I loved it so much this was my first gay erotica and I love it"

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My Private Dancer

"What a wonderful story. I love the instant attraction between Ray and Dominic. This story isn’t just sexy but hilarious. I would definitely recommend this story to anyone who wants a love story without the games. This story is a heartwarming love story. Fantastic job author. 💞🩷💞"

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My private dancer

"Simply amazing, emotional, sensual, erotic, passionate etc. Cant help falling in love with the main characters especially Ray. Hope ill meet my Ray in the near future. So passionate, loveable and loyal.❤️❤️❤️"

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Tessy

"This is so good🥹❤️"

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My Private Dancer

"Ray and Dominic are absolutely perfect together. I honestly wasn't sure if I would enjoy this story or not. I'm usually not into m/m action without a female present, but to my shock, I truly enjoyed reading this. They definitely represented true love, and I am glad that Ray helped Dominic come out without actually making him come out "

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One of the most Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious book ever

"This intimately unsurpassable masterpiece will live on in my library foreverrrr❤️ I gawked at ever smexy scene, threw my phone over the exceptionally well written flirting that made me blush, may have even taken notes 📝 (Thank you Author-San) these guys have my whole heart ❤️ 🤧 what a great read, I didn’t even notice it was coming to an end, it’s so very well paced and descriptive 🤌 I mean- the writing is just- 🤌oof- love love love! 🫶 Thank you 🥹 long live DomxRay !"

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My private dancer

"Such a good book ...loved the characters enjoyed it immensely ...thank you "

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My private dancer

"I loved this story and enjoyed reading it, thank you for sharing ❤️"

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My Private Dancer, Good story with good twists and turns. Recommend it

"Like it and and recommend it "

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5 ☆ great book

"Great book couldn't put it down, story line was brilliant, and the characters were amazing 5☆"

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Worthy love story

"Wow, I really enjoyed this book. I fell in love with the 2 main characters. Would love to have a bestie like Ray has. "

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My Private Dancer

"I like the novel because it includes the sexual content. Even better if the novel includes explicit pictures."

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Great read!

"Plot, characters, and writing style were amazing. Needs editing to correct homonym errors, but these are easily overlooked by the plot."

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Nice novel.

"Overall, the writing style is good and the words used are easy to understand. The whole plot is simple yet attractive."

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