What is your opinion?
O wow
"Love it one of my favorites"
I like this book..
"This book really shows the struggle of single mother.. and her hardship bcz she got pregnant in early age.. and the hardship of a child being without a father"
Great!
"I love the plot of this story! It's one I haven't seen before so I'm very intrigued to see where it goes from here! The characters are all distinct and interact well with each other, and the concept is original. This isn't a critique as much as a suggestion, but play around with starting a new paragraph every time a different character starts talking. I do this and I find it helps the flow of conversations. Also, watch out for using the right form of a word - so 'head over heels' instead of 'head over heals.' But that was the only mistake like that I noticed. Overall I enjoyed reading through this. You have real potential with this story and I'm excited to keep going! Great job :)"
