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Two Alphas, One Pack {mxm}

"I love the plot, and the writing is really good; it's not too much, and well detailed. But the main character is so feminised that it's honestly not even funny. I don't read omegaverse very often, but the 'Alpha' being so emasculated is just stupid. If you read any other book the Alpha isn't this guy with pretty pink lips and long flowing hair or hairless skin; I'm not saying that a guy being pretty isn't realistic, many men are pretty and can be if they so wished. But this guy is meant to be some Alpha, and I understand that he may be the bottom, but just because someone is a bottom, it doesn't mean they have to be short with long hair and pink pouty lips. Just make them a girl at that point. I was excited to read an Alpha x Alpha book for once, but the MC is practically an Omega. Sorry about my rant, I was just excited to read a MxM book where the main characters would be roughly the same height and build, for once, and there would be a bit of a power struggle. I was disappointed, but the author put in effort in this book, which is admirable. This is just my opinion. "

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