Great Potential

"I think this story has great potential so far. The emotional intensity is strong and believable. The characters are great. I like stories that aren't afraid to talk about serious subject matters. The timeline is a tad confusing, I'm not sure how long things have been between events, but that's an easy fix. It sounds like Astrid has a history of trauma, and I'd like to know more about this, add a build-up to her attempted suicide so it's not just because of Ryker. I hope you continue writing this, I think it can be a really good story:)"